RENSAKU: AS CLOSE TO TRIGLAV

Evening, 9 Sept. 2018, Radovljica, Slovenia; a linked verse co-edited by Stephen Gill (Tito), Dimitar Anakiev (Kamesan) & Branko Manojlovic; based partly on a long journey made between summer and autumn. Footnotes are appended.


.

As close to Triglav1

as we could be …

a cloud or two apart

          -Tito


Autumn begins: my

two guests were looking for a church

but they found me

         -Kamesan


In the mountain breeze

a campanula2 has turned

deep gentian blue

         -Branko


To my pen as I write

atop the peak —

hoverfly

       -Tito


Very long ginko3 —

jotting down poetry

using a goldenrod4

        -Kamesan


Sun-ignited clouds

weighing into

the Julian Alps5

        -Branko


Lying on its side

on a carpet of grass,

a foal in bliss

         -Tito


Snails, cats and me —

in the kiwi garden today

friends from Kyoto

        -Kamesan


The slower path:

deep in forest

spindle6 berries

        -Branko


A sea wind

blowing through the belfry,

the bells almost tone

        -Tito


It’s getting colder —

next to a Communist shrine

the Crucifixion

       -Kamesan


Here Soča7 ran red

with soldiers’ blood …

kids throwing stones

       -Branko


The pale weeping tree

planted above

my white dog’s8 grave

        -Tito


Hard for me to grasp

the vanishing of a world:

yerba buena9

      -Kamesan


Imagine the bulging eyes

that first spied these

viridian lakes10

       -Branko


Wavering beneath me

through sun-dappled shallows,

faces of mosaic saints

         -Tito


My big moustache

too wild it got this morning —

the street is so steep

         -Kamesan


Through the hushed arteries

of ancient Piran11

to its very heart

        -Branko


A pair of flip-flops

left at the base of the olive —

a story awaits

        -Tito


Those xenophobic

mosquitoes: bite after bite

for fugitives

       -Kamesan


In Lika valley12

dark-eyed Syrians — a wary

herd of deer


Branko


.

Footnotes:

1 Mt. Triglav, highest mountain in Slovenia (and former Yugoslavia), 2864m, visible at rear left in the photo

2 campanula, bellflower

3 ginko, haiku composition stroll

4 goldenrod, tall yellow-flowered genus, solidago, mostly from N. America

5 Julian Alps, easternmost range in the Alps, stretching from Italy into Slovenia

6 spindle, pink-berried shrub genus, euonymous

7 Soča, river flowing to the Adriatic from the Julian Alps, scene of First World War fighting between Italy and Austro-Hungarian Empire

8 white dog, a spaniel from upland Nepal named Gabbitas, buried in England

9 yerba buena, spearmint

10 viridian lakes, Plitvice Lakes in Croatia

11 Piran, old port town in Slovenian Istria

12 Lika, region of central Croatia, bordering northern Bosnia-Herzegovina


Comments